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Old 02-25-05, 07:01 PM   #55
MC Firetruck
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Voted For: Legend

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C'mon fam da *Punches* i spit will leave ya *Black-Out* fella
Cuz my 2 *Fist* be like Jayz and *Rip* lika *Roc-Fella*
Weak opener, punch didn't hit very hard
And its only *Legend* of me to put ya in place
Thatz in front of ya lil sis when she gettin me sum face
Weak attempt at a personal, didn't hit
How're ya a legend if ya record is 11-9?There must be a mistake
Maybe you need to be like that *Dick*in your*Hand* and take a *Break*
If it weren't for the explanation, it comes off as though you're saying his dick broke.
Shit nigka how you rockin 50?Oh I see he makes ya look *Rich*
Since ya only gettin *Pennies* by bein da Legend of suckin guys *Dicks*
Weak...
Me merkin you,isnt that so true,Talkin shit get ya body caught up blue
Tek 9's be bustin,Seein you on da block hustlin,NAW!!you da kinda nigka no1 be trustin
I sure hope this was 2 bars that you just forgot to space out, otherwise it's stretched to hell. Nothing hit either
Thiz battle mine so take action and run away till dis *Loss Catches Up*
^^And get 50 cents thrown in ya *Cup*
Fairly decent punch, understood it without the explanation
And ya rap skillz will never be *Notorious*so stop lying to ya self
You being a *PIMP* shit do pigs fly?Or are you just dreaming to ya self
Blah, could've been worded a lot better.

Legend:
Lyrically bomb shit, spit twice as nice, as if my tongues' split
Like dollar bills Assas-Sin beating me is definitely non-cents
Decent meta, aight opener overall
Compared to digital cameras with low resolutions I'm distorting ya image
Got you frightened of finish lines so you wont come close to winning
Setup was decent, 2nd line didn't deliver.
Assas-Sin spit hot?.....not even being of dragon decent..
Bowel movements during your happiest hour wont help you drop some nice shit
Weak...
Watch your face cave in from ways that my fist and your head is mergin
Rolling blunts with Bible pages wont help you create dope verses
Weak, but better than most of the other bars in this battle
Mad instincts compromise any efforts you make to defeat me
Facing me with two drumsticks couldn’t give enough props to beat me
Weak closer.

Overall, I'm gonna have to give this one to Legend, although this was a wack battle. Assas-Sin, most of your lines were stretched, and the ones that weren't had other problems. You dropped 2 consecutive bars talking about dicks...that's played as hell. Stop explaining your punches too, it's booty.
Legend, your verse was weak too, punches weren't hard and you had some played shit too. Both of you need to elevate quite a bit, but no hate. Keep it real

Oh, and return the vote here. Do it honestly and explained.
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