Voted For: CeleriTy

Gwantanaflow
your stucture was ight but the flow like you couldnt fit any punch in there, there just aint anything creative about your verse it flowes and rhymes but yo where the punches dawg that ish weak yo, up some vocab and throw in some creativty wittyness in there and you will be good. no hate

Celerity
alot better the stucture is better the punches hit better you just had the creativty that you need yo

no hate