Voted For: ••••Dice••••

Allow me to introduce myself Squad I am your conscience,
WTF we do’n here? Ya know Dice is nice with the phonics,
- nice multi here, and a solid punch to start off

Us in a battle please...it’s just nonsense,
Look fool!!! We can’t even spell Eboniks,
- kinda weak, not really feel'n this, seems like a filler to me, rhyming for the sake of rhyming

Put us in the spotlight ‘n’ now I gotta try to save this case…
Fuk let’s just do what we did last time, (bite to save some face)…
-Took this battle and really twisted it here, don't be surprised if you lose a few people here. I understand where your going with it, and cause I do, I like it. It's punch in itself

Ya know them kids is kidding they say you got some skill,
I know losses are tough to swallow, but here…take the pill.
- See another multi here, and the punch is funny and creative good solid punch


It's no joke don’t get me wrong, but ya heart’n’head wanted me to pass this note along
“WTF? YOU DEAF? THAT FAT BITCH IS SING’N YOUR SONG”
Not try’n to sound cold, but when have we came up with one good punch?
-ssssssstttreeeetttcccched bar, need to cut out the filler words, this could have been a hard hitting punch and still was cause of the creativness of it, it was a nice approach but missed full impact.

Call it a hunch, but I’m think’n we stay-in-school, c’mon, let’s go pack your lunch.

-this was easily your best punch of the battle, the whole "stay in school" concept was nice, strong finish to an average to below average battle.





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