Voted For: Element

PuLSe

You call yourself a herb, so you must grow out the "earth"
If you got a penny for each my votes, a nickel's what you're worth
^like first line, not feeling second one

You say you're spittin' "fire", like a dragon, out yo mouth
Well, my flow is jus like "water", so I wash yo fire out
^bit self-glorification here, bleh...

I'll "air" you out wit ease, 4 elements you fuckin' pussy
Battling me, you're hurting your life, like you out and playin' hookie
^okay okay

It's a lose-lose situation, for this fuckin' dulse
I win, you get a L, you win, you're without a PuLSe
^decent closer

Okay,opener's nice and you had some good punches but no real personals. Get more creative punchlines that hit harder, vocab was good. Had your flow on lock and structure was nice as well. Just use more bold lines next time to really bring the opponent down...no hate...


Element

I dont got enough time, to diss you using great rhymes
When Im done there wont be a Pulse, just straight lines
^good opener

fuck this kid yall, I dont even mean to sound all sexist
But hes wack wearin a cowboy hat, shovelin horse crap in Texas
^hehe,funny

My Lexus is blingin, while your swingin round ya lasso
I 'swear' to tell the truth, I think your a fucking asshole
^decent bar

You think Im just a newb, acting like you can walk right through
Ill plug my 'keyboard' into 'speakers', so I can 'stereotype' you
^okay okay

I cant be rattled or out-battled, get that through your skull
You aint new to RV, your just a newb-bashing bitch named SPuL...
^first line bleh, second rofl

Good punches and funny personals in there, not too much played content. Flow was good,found good balance with your vocab. Nice wordplay here and there, structure was good and haven't got any bad comments. Was good battle!

My vote goes to Element because I just felt he had more hardhitting punches and such in there...please rtf...

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