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Old 02-26-05, 06:49 AM   #2
xRell-i-Ventx
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From: BodyMore,MurdalaNd
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ight im listening to the track get off...omg this sound bad fam...your emotion needs work your delivery i dont like your over dubs there 2 damn loud...flow need work...omg that hook lmao @ this..it's funny i know its not suppose to be though..are u rhymeing over a beat wit a tag? u need a pop filter yea basically u need elevation in every asepct keep elevating props on work...


ps. u got lil kids screaming in the background or something?
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