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You Cant Handle The Truth
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werdage werdage werdage...definetly feelin' this piece right here jo...
CountrEE Jay you got nyce vocab but you should use more internal rhyme when you're doing bars that long kyd...you got nyce vocab but it's like if you were on staGe and you had dope lyrics and didn't know how to perform them...you write well but you lack finese when you do it, more INternal rhyme would help you a lot...still a good job was done by you on this, definetly keep it up...
Mz Fyre, no flaws except that magaZine line (as smeone else mentioned) you had nyce internal rhyme with shorter bars which helped yours flow a lot better, and that helped draw the emotions out better, you definetly shined on this one, keep it up kyd...
hit my jawn "Picture Perfect" up in here...
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Originally Posted by Artik Phrost
LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat
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Originally Posted by PhaseOne
my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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