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Old 02-26-05, 08:01 AM   #9
JRoy
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ok listening to this......

Cali.....you need to work on rapping to the beat....you sound like you just rappin to get it over....u need to rap on beat......the beat needed to be louder.....i could barely hear it.......same with SenseR...........SenseR the hook......was iight i've heard better from you.......the ish was hot tho on ya verse....the flow was nice.....we need to get on a collab man.......word.......well man.......this was a overall ehh ok track......luckily SenseR was on it....or it woulda been ........ehh bad.....i mean......Cali you need to switch ur voice to this........and rap to the beat....dont just write......man...woh..this was som you just threw together.......

SenseR-On hook=7/10 on Verse=8.5/10
Cali=Verse 1=6/10 Verse 2=6.5/10
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