aight feelin the beat...

aight flow was coo..breathe control problems here and there...fell of at a few spots...delivery was ok...dont sound to comfortable on the mic...sound like you just reading of the paper...lyrics were aight...chorus was str8...you need a pop filter fam...overall i see potential just need to polish up...if you want a couple pointers holla at me...peace


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