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Old 02-26-05, 01:00 PM   #30
Skriptz
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ


MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ:
Oooo...nice story here MiSta...I pretty much liked your story, your flow was pretty good, vocab was nice & not messed up, and...but overall the ur story had emotion up in there & I was feelin ya topic-drop tho...

Tha Godfatha:
you had a nice drop too, story was good, and the flow + vocab was good here also, & the structure was in place, but overall the emotion to it, wasn't like MiSta's though, but overall you had an aight drop too...
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