Voted For: *holly$wood*

fuck a newbie...you're skills is ass like round roast...
youre high up on the wack scale...im down around dope...
this clown has found hope...battlin a legend...
asked him how many lines he could stand he said seven...
this herb ass must need new glasses...fact is...
im 50 times better than ya ass is...and thats with...
the benefit of the doubt...im dumbin out...drop ya shit son...time and youre luck's runnin out...
*****ok schema you nice but....you aint try halfway on this! i dont even think d/r's would accept this from you, alot of self glorify and underestimating in this one
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Like salt to da open~wound i leave ya skin 'tinglin' so you groap~ya~crew//
like erosion of ya foundation ya aint on solid ground an ya throat~goin~spew//
...work on the struc but creative line here
Like clora~phorm~to~da~pope put ya down like fat basterd usin poor~form~on~da~rope//
Crew sorely formed da~losses~day~cant~cope got you chokin like Ca~losas~dick~ramed~ya~throat
...seriously work on ya form nice vocab, nice multis but its hard to flow..
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overall both verse had faults, schema was hell simple and holly verse was messed up
but overal gotta give it to holly for the simple fact he tried and dont wanna give the impression dat newbs can never bet vets who dont try
v/holly