Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ


Tears coming down my eyes, as I quickly change personality
My own girlfriend pointing a gun at my head, hand is shaking furiously
I’ve broken her heart in pieces, like an rose has lost beautiful pedals
I’ve split her heart in 2 like sandals, I treated her dirty not like an gold medal
On my knees, my lungs are like an vibrator, shaking. I was in a havoc of fear
Thinking, if she pull the trigger, everything I done when I was alive, will disappear
Her eyes red, she was angry, furious, like the devil. If I’d talked she would turn into Satan
I hit her, more times than Roy Jones, been hitting a boxer. As I rethink, I felt so ashamed
I put my hands together, started saying words, I felt like I was talking in foreign language
I was praying, telling god to forgive my sins, begging for my life, I didn’t want my brain, a spinach
I started saying “sorry”, though that will not help, she has so much hatred on me, deep in her layers
She puts the gun in my mouth, like a dick. My lips quivering, she looked me in the eye, Your last prayers?
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.thats a nice fucking verse mista...really feeling the vivd picture you painted on this, and i dont do topicals so thats really saying something
your last line was felt man, bout to say RIP mista authentiq!
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when i roll out wit tha crew, i know my return may be denied
i dont wanna know that my girl cried, cuz her siolder died
so i put my hands together and i look towards tha sky
and pray to tha lord that on this day i do not die
'dear lord if you choose to lay my soul to rest on this day
i shall accept my fait, but please dont take my life away'
'i need just one more day, to say what i gotta say, to my brother
i gotta tell my girl i love her, and show love to my mother'
im not afraid of death, you cant take my life if you please
im just askin fo a day, before my ashes are blowin in tha breeze
this is my final prayer, a plee for life
ima need the hand of god... to remove this knife.....
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this was good too, but in a more direct and simply put way
nice verse with this but compared to the above it lacks real emotion
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.gotta v/ mista authentiq
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