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Old 02-26-05, 04:24 PM   #9
Parallel
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Slob
ight yo that was basic i didnt see much creativty about your verse you had basic punches and set up lines but you didnt fisnh wit wordplay theres tempts but there wack yo, trying uppin that ish and it would be tight like your stucture and flow is decent but your punche sare seriously weak, no hate yo pz

Mista
nothing great here seen betta from you but i like the way you said your words ive seen much elevation from you like your grammer is alot better the stucture is better the punch lines are feirce and just killed this cat with yo ish, everything about your verse was better, pz
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