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Old 02-26-05, 05:10 PM   #11
RiDiKiLLoZ
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Voted For: Philly

this is another battle of whose verse isnt as shit... cmon guys, its almost as if i can throw the line "my computer is red" and punch u both out... ha

STYLE:
i think u both couldve worded this shit a lot better, and can greatly benefit from just purely reading real lyrics, go check out www.ohhla.com n study several of ur favorite artists, especially u mc-bad-boy, i didnt have to check ur profile to know u werent more than a 12 yr old, theres nothing wrong wit being young, u just gota make up wit hard work, may i suggest 2 things: stay in school, and study Shyheim.

PUNCH:
i think this was more bitch-slapping than punching.
Philly started off aite, but i dont beleive jack n jiLL ever made it past that hiLL, let alone a damn bean stock... wasnt it some other dude who traded a cow or something, n the reeboks just sounded like a forced rhyme.
mc-bad-boy, 1st bar? not a punch at all. 2nd bar? coulda been worded a lot better. 3rd bar? played out line, whole line is predictable n couldve been worded better

FLOW:
i dont know whose was worse here guys, lines were stretched, no internal connection, just plain long sentences with any given word that rhymed with the preceding line.

TECHNIQUE:
ok, leme start wit mc-bad-boy, besides certain arguable slangs, if u can spell, u cant deliver a good punch: rhymes, bastard, "all the times?", spit, kidnap, his, like, disgrace"... this is close to being a piece of artwork, drawn with anything but english
Philly, u've got some potential creativity, this is where u edged ur opponent in this battle; however u both need to work on better rhymes, better personals, better multis, better everything

S: =tiE=
P: Philly > mc-bad-boy (slightly)
F: =tiE=
T: Philly > mc-bad-boy
OVERALL: Philly edged mc-bad-boy simply by writing english
VOTE: Philly, tho a part of me tells me i shouldnt vote for either
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