Voted For: Skriptz

solid battle....

Buck...
>This kid aint no ''Real'' emcee, he's a Whack ''Shady''
He was Conceived by Bobby n Whitney, the Boys a Crack Baby
-weak opener...5/10
>Yeah you do hate me, But i Wonder Why?
U Just a fuckin herb that buzzes around rv like a Housefly..
-flow off here....4/10
>We all know you gonna Deny, but kid you do Cheat
Couldnt ''Serve'' Ya ''Punces'' for Lunches as Hobo 'Meat'
-coulda been worded better....6/10
>It aint that you Untouchable, its nobody wants to Touch
your on every thread like my shadow....
.............................Obsessed much?
-okay idea, but coulda beend worded better again....6/10

overall: 21/40.....okay, buck, had some good ideas, but your flow and structure kinda went to shit on some of the lines....just fix that up a little and this coulda been a solid verse....i think thats what mainly killed your verse, few weak punches, not really any good personals either, so i have to go with skriptz

skriptz...
>Ah, this kid is battling me again… but he’s still a non-vet
Said he has skills… to bad it hasn’t really been found yet
-haha, little played, 6/10
>You’re far from dope, man… so you might as well quit*
I told him that his punches were chappy…
……………………………… so he went on and licked his lips
-haha, solid line here, 8/10
>He thinks he’s a textcee… shit… I’ll smack you with a MIC
Threw his punches in the air… and he thinks they took flight
-okay, 6/10
>I’ll slap this bitch around… and watch this homo get pissed
Said he’s coming at me with punches… that never even exist
-haha, nice finisher, 7/10

overall: 27/40...word, flow and structure were solid, really easy to read, not too much complexity, but still got the job done, few nice personals/punches in there, still had enough to take this one, decent drop man

v/skriptz

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