Odi et Amo
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Voted For: Da_Throwdest
$^Ost-rich^$
Yo, I'm a suicide bomber, who'll kill yo family with minute decibles//
im incredible, with the stealth of one white guy in the middle of Cuba's festivels//
^self-glorificaiton: bleh
roasting you like testicles on a blue flame , with a fat person next to it blushin' and sweating with shame//
^okay okay
running through the window screaming that Ostrich's the loudest//
and the fact that he just merkd some shit they call Da_Throwdest//
^decent
sorry chief, but you need some information//
and it's easier to beat you then Muhammod Ali at Operation//
^not feeling 1st line,2nd's good
inflamion hurst when you don't follow the rules,
i asked more ten lines max.//
and you gave me another bubble gum shit by Ja-rule
^uhm,doesn't do the trick
Used self-glorification here and there,some decent punches but no personals.Some of ya shit didn't really make much sense,structure can be better but vocab's good. Flow was okay, just try to get some hardhitting creative lines in there...no hate...
Da_Throwdest
drastic spits hit ya chest, quit kid ur powerless
rip dome's off necks, leave red fluids, drippin' like rusted shower heads
^okay opener
"Shit's U" a real bitch, feel this, this is my show so i'ma steal it
ya style resembles having sex with condoms, cuz i don't feel it
^nice line but don't rhyme with same word!
u don't have nebody u can run 2 in a crew, so hopeless
wanted people 2 up ya weak verse b4 ya even post it
^decent bar
ya lucky i spit 1st, cuz i react sick causing static
Take-In-Line's like ya a starving crack addict
^hmmm,not really feeling it
ur age u can't fade, i stole the spotlight like snatching lamp shades
fill ya camp up with grenades, the only time ostrich is sick with aids
^okay, bit played but good
so Supreme Killin' ost-rich with "Flow's of Gleams"
Cuttin him "Short" of "Threads" like seems of jeans
^aight aight
as a kid & now u have always been an usual square
i run more "Circles" around ya, then "Def" kids playin'
"Musical Chairs"
^good closer
Not best battle but you stayed more consistent with the punches and tried a few personals. Wasn't always that creative, had some played shit in there but you took this battle because the other cat dropped quite weak. Flow was good,structure was okay but vocab could be slightly better. Just try more creative things in next battle...
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