no...shit was aiight..no hate...but umm this shit would of been hot if

1. You sound like you was talkin..instead of rappin
2. your production...your voice was too loud...it overpowered the beat and thats not good to do on a beat like that...you should of put more emotion into it and lowered your voice

other than that..this was a hot track fam

keep it up...

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Lord. Wun