MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

My punches put you in a choke hold make you see blue
I'll leave you bloody and eat you like sloppy joe's for food
^okay okay,bit self-glorification though

I seen your profile, your age is like infant punches 1 year old
Turn your lungs into a paper mache, leaving it fold
^good bar

You aint dissing me, you dissing your self, look at them holes in ya name
Damn kid your retarted, like converse, your tongues stays open for them dick man
^hehe,funny shit

Like your user title i'll show you my guns and you'll become a gun runner
talk shit in my toilet and i'll your ass on fire, like a fucking bunsen burner
^nice closer

Overall good battle,had some nice creative punches and personals in there,good wordplay but a little bit of self-glorification sometimes. Had your flow on lock, structure was cool and vocab was tight as well.


::..:$lobK::..:

Since This Commission Came On The Site..The Justice Been Missin'
Lets Not Get "Technical" But This "Black Queen"' Has A Fucked Judicial System..lol*
^hehe, funny opener

So Listen "Mista"..Am I Suppose To Get Aroused..Cuz Ur Rec Is Outta The Clouds?
Na..U Dont Even Deserve Bows..Cuz "The Jury" Is Always Part Of A Crowd..lol
^lmao,nice shit

Are You A Vet?..Na U Aint..And That's Y You Aint Earnin Respect..
And How Is Homie A G..When He Get Hard Off Of Pictures Ova Da Net..
^rofl at 2nd line

You A Nerd Kid..So Wat If Im New..Cuz It's Wins Im Lurkin..
And This May Sound Disturbin'..But Ur Guilty Of Bein Whack..And That's The Verdict
^good closer

Tight battle, real creative punches and mad personals! Was feeling your flow, structure was dope and vocab was impeccable. Made me laugh here and there, nice read!

Dope battle from both of you!!!

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