Thread: BLACK vs J DOT
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Old 02-27-05, 01:31 PM   #4
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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Voted For: J DOT

im bout to murk u, case in point
rip open ya skin to find nothin, my anger is at a point
...YOU RHYMED THE WORD TWICE, KINDA WEAK
sorry waste of ya daddy sperm stop livin
im bout to kill u for even thinkin im gone punk out till dis evenin....THIS DIDNT EVEN RHYME, NO PUNCH
fuckin sissy, u nothin, i told u
take tha dick out ya ass cuz its crunch time, u totaled
THE PROBLEM WITH YA VERSE IS U TALK ABOUT WHAT YOU GONNA DO, NO PUNCHES , NO PERSONAL, NO-NO

Look kid, ur not a factor, ur beatin urself
Callout jdot if u will, and come up shorter than elfs
I’ll tighten my belt, b4 ur ghostwriter beat me
DECENT 1ST 2 LINES, AT LEAST A PERSONAL IN THERE
Ur steps beyond garbage, time to digest what i eat
beef is nuthin. roam tha NOK thread if u want
only thing big about BLACK, consist with his font
THIS VERSE IS NOT THE BEST JDOTS DONE, NEEDED HARDER PUNCHES AND SOME WORDS DIDT HIT, BUT BECAUSE HE AT LEAST ATTEMPTED TO ATTACK HIS FOE, UNLIKE BLACK..
I GOTTA GIVE HIM THE WIN..
return the favor please
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