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Originally Posted by Tmka"D"

aight feelin the beat...

aight flow was coo..breathe control problems here and there...fell of at a few spots...delivery was ok...dont sound to comfortable on the mic...sound like you just reading of the paper...lyrics were aight...chorus was str8...you need a pop filter fam...overall i see potential just need to polish up...if you want a couple pointers holla at me...peace

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this is my basic feedback right here lyrics were str8 to me u do have potential just..get that deliveru up emotion up dont sound like u yellin make it natural and try goin over your lines before u spit them...ur lyrics are actually really good stay up

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