Voted For: Cincanatus

Normal Punches-Cincanatus, some punches were funny, but some weren't. Overall work on keeping ya ish consistant. Buck.Shot,

Personal Punches-Cincanatus, really the making fun of his name was the best personal. Some decent personals. Work on better material. Buck.Shot- no really hard hitting personals. All are already knowng bout him, so don't really hit that hard.

Metaphors- Cincanatus, not the best metaphors, but better then Buck.Shot's. The jello commercial was the best one. Buck.Shot, a lot of your metaphors weren't that good. Highschool comics? How the hell do you think of that? Some comics are good, so overall just work on stronger metaphors.

Multiple Rhymes- Neither

Structure- Cincanatus, just overall looks better. Buck.Shot, your structure has improved amazingly, but it still needs some elevation.

Flow- Tie, flow was fine for both.

Word Play- Tie, neither had really good wordplay.

Cincanatus, your verse was stable, but you need to work on your wordplay. You have basically gotten personals, but your wordplay suffered here. Try some harder personal content as well.

Buck.Shot, your verse was aight, but I don't feel that you put enough work into it. Some of your lines felt like fillers, work on your personal punches and your wordplay.

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v/Cincanatus

One Vote. One Battle. One Victory


Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

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