i love the title of this piece, and as you go on writing, it takes a different toll, then your heading suggests, thats dope, i was expecting one thing and i was surprised by the change of direction, nice job on this poem, your words were filled with emotion, hence why you use emotional words, describing words, great piece. keep it up.1

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