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Old 02-27-05, 06:17 PM   #8
Magic5
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Voted For: Golden shellz

Golden Shellz
structure is good.. flow is pretty nice.. no multis.. wordplay was close to average.. a few of your punches connected.. no good personals..

.Grafh.
structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. you attempted wordplay.. but most of it was either played or just garbage.. for example, i know ive seen that Roy Jones line before.. you didnt have very many punches your shit was just random statements.. like, "ill make your record 15-1-2".. what does that have to do with anything punch related?.. you attempted a name play, but i can tell already it is MAD played..

Overall
.Grafh. attempted a personal.. doesnt really mean shit though cause it sucked.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. Golden Shellz had better wordplay and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Golden Shellz gets my vote..

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