Thread: BLACK vs Kesse
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Old 02-27-05, 06:37 PM   #26
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Voted For: Kesse

Kesse
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. you attempted some wordplay.. the line about his name was pretty good.. you connected a few punches.. but yo, you should stop using links.. they are turning played.. that took away from the two punchlines you used them in.. other then that.. that was a good name flip for a personal..

BLACK
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. no good wordplay.. at all.. none of your punches connected.. either you were just making statements or dropping complete ass.. either way, nothing of yours hit.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. Kesse had better wordplay, more connecting punches and a better personal.. so basing off of that.. Kesse wins in a landslide..

VOTE - KESSE

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