Voted For: Linguistics

linguistics~nice opener, your flow in this verse was good to read, nice wordplay here, good usage of personals on his name, i like the linguistics bar you used, nice,lol...overall good verse, you stayed on point straight thru and didnt fall off...good job.1
e's an ef~ok, you had a decent line here or there, but you failed to prove anything you were saying, you could have used links, or made even more punches out of your personals with better wordplay, nothing really stuck too far out tho for me, you seemed to use some filler and your structure was off in parts, no hate at all, just work on elevating, overall good job both, your verse just wasnt enough to beat your opponent..1

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