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Voted For: TiLT
TiLT
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. you attempted some wordplay.. it came out slightly above average.. a few of your punches connected.. no good personals..
illmatico
structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. wordplay was pretty gay.. nothing really impressed me.. a few, at best, of your punches connected.. that was a pretty good name play in the first line..
Overall
illmatico had the better personals.. both had a good structure and flow.. neither had multis.. TiLT had better wordplay and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. TiLT gets my vote..
VOTE - TILT
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