This was a pretty good open mic. some decent imagery, but what stood out most was how much it flowed and how good it was worded, only a couple of spots could have used a bit more work, and from what i have seen so far, this was the best piece.

wonderin whats so funny, i noticed his pose..
hand on his hip, his other hand scratchin his nose..
this wouldn't be odd, but consider the situation..
i was doin the same thing..mirored to my creation..
now it's so clear, how come i didn't see it before..
that my children were me, and a little bit more..

that whole part right there was dope. everything went together well, and you made the piece interesting. where u didnt wanna stop reading so u had to finish it. A lot of the other stuff i have read here i skim through but the opening of this caught me

good piece

i would say 9/10

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