Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

wow, this is kinda a bunk battle, but spy gets it, heres what i think

medicine
>My rhyme,s performed so nicely , you should just sit and listen ,I'm so percise with this device ,that you have no chance of winnin.
-not really a punch.....3/10
>So you just stand there grinnin, while I'm crushin your text verse, this is only in writing , with percussion it gets worse.
-uh, no punch at all, went no where, 2/10
>I'm touchin my opponents right through the computer, while your discussin with your husband which hat looks cuter
-uh, okay play at personal, but very weak wordplay 4/10

overall: 9/30....wel, not a bad start man, but you gotta up alot of things. first, work out some sort of basic structure that you can build a verse off, dont just write it out like your writing a story, make it easier for the voters....next, even out your lines and develop a continuous flow throughout your verse, or else your punches and personals will lose alot of their effect.....next, punches, you have to aim them directly at your opponent, dont softly word them, or hold back anything, you want to make your punch stand out and leave your voters with a sense that you've made an impact, also, be straight.....personals, you had the right idea, just need to up/elevate wordplay and complexity, and you should be fine....

ultimate spy....i dont really need to go through your verse, but yours wasnt that great either, flow was off a little, kinda came weak, opener coulda been worded better, same with closer, had some good ideas and your punches hit harder, so thats why you get my vote...

v/'spy

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