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Old 02-28-05, 01:23 AM   #9
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Okay Man Like I Sad, You Got Potentila Nice punches In Here I Found Them Very Creative, This Is What I Like To See More Often Around Here Creative Ish, Any Way Your Vocabulary Is Still Fresh Like Always, One Thing Your Down Fall Is Structure Try And Work On That And Make The Lines Line Up So That Bars Match, Also Add Some Meta's In Here Man, Good Job...8.5/10

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Okay You Came With Better Vocabulary But Worst Structure I Mean Come On So Newb Style, Try Line The Bars Up So The ymatch, Also Punches, Wow! It's Directly At Your Opponent, Meaning Peronals Basically Which You Had Less Of, Try And Do SOme Back GGround Checks On Your Opponent It'll Do You Good Man, Nice Job On Vocab Though...6/10

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