Your vocals aren't smooth so it sounds too lound over the instrumentals.

Ok, on the real man I'm not hatin, but I don't know what the hell these other people are hearing, you do not ride the beat for nothin, you rhyme like Silkk The Shocker back in 98' man, your flow is all off the beat. I've listened to your other stuff and this is about as close as you've come, but your jus spittin, you're not stayin with the beat. Seriously work on that, pace yourself.

Keep at it though