Aiight first one -- You sound like your trynna be quiet.. Dont be scared to get loud on the mic a little.. Cause people who rap quiet kinda sound bitch.. I hope your not facing anyone hard cause youd be pretty easy to out-class on that battle.. Just a heads up..

Second one -- Its not bad, beats hot.. Sounds like some mid to late 90's type beat.. I love that shit.. Your flows slightly better on this track, but you still sound a bit whimpy on the mic.. Some people can carry it, some people cant.. Well see how your style develops around it.

Peace.

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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