not bad man i got some thing to go with this and im a drop it in a few mins man but that shit is fuckin tight a 8.5/10

The faint sound of a slap travels throughout his home
As he prepares himself for yet another day all alone
Trapped inside of this cage, his parents barely acknowledge him
No knowledge of the real world, his parents path is what hes following
Props himself up, seated on his stain covered carpet
Drug abusing father so his mind is cluttered wit garbage
Only 3 rooms in his house living room, bath room, and kitchen
Only educated on 3 things poverty, drugs, and sinning
Groggy eyed he looks in the mirror and recognizes only a simple
Child abused kid with no hope or potential
Turns knob on the faucet a brown substance is released
Deceased rodents on the floor avoids contact with his feet
Strolls sluggishly in the kitchen his stomach is growling loudly
Surrounded by parents howling, hes ducking fist fling cowardly
Skips his meal to go in his room so hes not to be disturbed
From scribbling words, this is his feeling like a bird
This is his feeling form reality the soothing of his mind
Describing his life while jotting down a few sentences that rhyme
Doubts all his ability, could he make it on his own?
But still the only answer he gets is. HARDLY

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