good job, i never read anything from you before i dont think, but you have the idea, the concept, and everything else...the only peeve i have with this piece is your spelling....the way you project your words is so important i cant stress it enough...please dont write like this:::: da hoodz was cold and lonely, i hads to git my nine..or some shit...i'm not trying to hate at all but.....spelling is important to the reader, to better get a feel for the poem..keep dropping.1

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