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Old 02-28-05, 03:51 PM   #12
xRell-i-Ventx
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ohh this kanye shit..i coiuld have got this beat i didnt want it though.....ok lyrics are kinda simplistic but thats a good thing because niggas is stupid(i spit simple most of the time to0)....flow is pretty good feelin your delivery...u got a whisper thing goin on with your voice nahmean ive peeped one of your tracks before i feel your emotion could be upped just a little more but first verse was pretty cool homie... hook is aight...

2nd ohhhhhhhhhh lol homie i was about to say your flow wasnt as flunet as the first verse but then u went off homie lol... lines were str8 nahmean ...solid drop right here dawg props on work keep elevating doin u


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