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Two songs-One a Diss, the other is off the top
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02-28-05, 03:56 PM
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Tmka"D"
aight listening to the diss...not feeling the beat....flow needs work...fell off in spots...you dont sound to confident on the mic yamean...delivery needs some work...lyrics were not to hard hitting yamean...overall i'm not really feeling this to much...
aight the free beat is pretty good...flow needs work on this one too fam...off and on beat...in sound like you kinda everywhere with it...delivery a lil better than in the diss but still needs some polishing...i'm not really feeling this free to much fam...lyrics were better than the first joint tho. keep doing ya thing tho aight elevation is coming
it's no point of me telling u something over and over again u digg..so basically this is something along the lines i would have said peace stay up and keep elevating
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