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Old 02-28-05, 05:30 PM   #4
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Checking It...

Your Voice Is A Lil Empowering Over The Beat When Spittin Your Verses. But Your Quality Is Decent. I Dont Hear Any Problems With Your Quality. Lyrics Aren't Bad, Not Canibus Shit but For This Type of Track Those Lyrics Seemed To Fit. Your Flow Wasn't Bad, You Seemed To Stretch Some Words To Fit A Snare or Two but Besides That It Was Solid.

You Sounded Liek Em When You First Said Yo, I Was Like "Wtf?" LoL...

Overall: This Is Overall Decent Track, The Chorus Needs To Highered If Your Gonna Use That, Lower Your Vocals A Few Decimals...Do Those Two Things, Oh and Add Another Verse. Its Decent Man. Stay Up.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177539

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