Originally Posted by Drama Queen
Liking this piece, your writing style makes it so easy to read...
The only time in my life that i aint depressed...
Untill i wake up and that feeling is laid to rest...
^loving these lines
Concept is good, not hard to relate to. Kept vocab quite simple as usual but it doesn't affect the content in your drop. Emotion was nice, it had this melancholic vibe over it in my opinion. You had your flow on lock and imagery was there...
Cause when I'm high, my mind just doesnt care...
It's almost like I'm livin life, but i wasnt there...
^also feeling these for sure
Enjoyed reading this piece!
DQ
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