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Old 02-28-05, 11:14 PM   #5
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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aight man its playin.....

lol singin...blah...it was a nice swing tho...

first verse...its real..i can relate..flow was ok seemed like it fell off at one part...lyrics was touchin..

chorus...was straight sounds betta then openin singin..

second verse...lyrics is still hot man...flow is betta then first verse...emotion is good in both verses by the way..

bridge is good place for it to go..third verse...still hot lyrics never fell off...

overall i like this track ckuz it bought the reality to people that dont go threw what we go threw...woulda been betta wit a female singin the chorus tho..
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