yeh nice beat..............you rode the beat real good, but you didn't really say anything that makes you want to play it back. but your vox were on with the beat. I don't kno if I really feel the hook though. It was ok, wasn't real catchy like a hook should b, like that sing a long shit that dmx does, you could do shit like that not as aggressive, but you could do that sing a long rap if you wanted to. You have a good rap voice with a good beat and you rode the beat. I give it a B. I'm goin to check out more of your shit though tonite
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