yeh thats a hot beat, i forget where it came from, its late, but you are riding it good. the hook is actually better then you let on you sing it out and it is tight wording. oh, the 3rd verse kind of fell off when you came in, but you hit back....................yeh you did this track. it's a good song. catchy and everythin you want it to be. nice, B+. Real close to an A, just your lyrically content wasnt 10 outta 10, but you got hot shit. hit me up at
rhymerelated77@yahoo.com if you want to get on my mixtape. i make all the beats. title the email with mixtape, and put who you are in the beat. good shit though dog, hit me back
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