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Old 03-01-05, 01:25 AM   #22
Triple_N
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The beat is tight...nice sample on the hook...you still use dat off low but it really hurt you on this track IMO...your emotion was good but wasn't used right...you was overemphasizing alot of times....emotion is always good but if its undisciplined it jus seems like ya yelling for no reason.....you shoulda been more melodic instead of beig more intense but it was a decent track with some touching up it could be ill.
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