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Voted For: Os1ris

Os1ris i thought your verse was a good . it was a lil stretched and i thought you coulda shortened it up some but over all it was a good verse . you had basic vocab . it was effective though and i thought you really had good personals . my favorite line "I'ma be generic, even though i know against you that it's useless/
Shows that your girls face proves grocery bags have multiple uses//" haha that shit jus cracked me up... the john kerry line was sorta dumb i thought you coulda worded it better.overall alright verse ... nice win

x-cell. you need to elevate some more ou had a nice drop .. watch your spelling .existence.acknowledge and a few other words were spelled wrong. otherwise your punches coulda hit alot harder. and your coulda had some better metaphors. otherwise i jus don't think your on os1ris level. no hate jus elevate

vote//Os1ris