aight the beat i wasn't feeling to much sounds all over the place to me...not feeling the flow to much you go off beat a lot...delivery was ok...but you dont sound to confident on the mic...the chorus is kinda loud ...lyrics were aight...you were originally a text head weren't you and you just went audio right? if so it sound like you tryna rap the same way you did text and usually that transition causes cats to try and fit to many words in a line so they have to speed up and slow down the flow all over the track to fit in all their words. anyway holla at me if you want a few pointers fam ...elevation is coming.
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