aight not really feeling the chorus at the beginning...sound monotone...need to work on ya mic presence and delivery...dont sound confident and like you reading right off the paper...emotion kinda lacking sound like you board...lyrics were str8...clarity problem tho...pronunciation...flow needs work feel out at a couple of spots...overall i wasn't feelin this joint to much...keep spittin tho elevation is coming fam






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