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^ i already did post some feed, you flow and structure are whack, ask anyone beside your fucking crew and buckshot, seriously, maybe you could be dope some day, but you arent right now.....seriously, you wanna be good, why dont you take some time in writing your shit, not spit it in 15 minutes and think your good....
"And Marv Jay you just like fish bait.
And you part of Red Bulls band so walk your ass and get some chesse cake."
-now dont even fuckin deny that aint horrible flow/structure
"The Establishment is really a great crew slash gang." totally contradicts what the fuck your saying and the basis of your verse
-and fuck you buddy, you coming on here like your so 'ganster', why dont you try typing properly and maybe you'll get some respect and people will take you fucking seriously
theres my feed bitch
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