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Old 03-01-05, 05:33 PM   #3
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From: Adanac
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^ that one wasnt bad man, i liked the rhyming in the first verse, i think you slacked of in the second one thou....it didnt flow as great and looked a little off track....kinda put out alot of the fire verse one started, so id give it a 6/10....but props to the first verse, went pretty smoothly./.........i guess thats the thing to do now....diss TE, hhaha, just dont be poor sports when we roll over you again thou
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