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Old 03-01-05, 06:59 PM   #14
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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Voted For: Linguistics

im that lonely flower that CREEPED-FROM-DA-CRACK,
im INCREASING-MAH-STACKS, you CHEAP-AND-JUST-WACK,
naw i take that back, you half DESCENT-IF-THAT, they be like fuck it, aint no BRINGING-HIM-BACK.
NO, NO PUNCH AT ALL, BUT YOU SHOULD JOIN THE MULTIE LEAGUE THOUGH
dont worry bout living i got CROOKS-THAT-ILL-KNOCK-U,
that keep 'TOASTERS' dat wont COOK-UP-YA-WAFFLES,
wont 'spare-ya-vest' they 'tear-ya-chest', now the cops LOOK-ING-4-FOSSILS,
SEE THIS IS A NICE VERSE, BUT NOT A NICE BATTLE VERSE, JUST FOCUS ON ADDING PUNCHES AND PERSONALS TO YA VERSES YOULL BE AIIGHT
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ya names Ma$term!nd..?, what u expect me to fear ya
and......
u could use the ! mark, still dont mean we gonna hear ya
GOOD PERSONAL BUT KINDA WEAK PUNCH
to dumb to understand, so dued i'll s-p-i-t...s-l-o-w-e-r
cuz hes on vaction from reality, but dued the trips over
DOPE, I LIKE THIS BAR
u herb man, i'll own ya, cuz i'm the best of the vets
he always lookin ova my sholda...........
............so i spit in the wind, and step to the left
ANOTHER FUCKING SICK BAR, GOOD
for real, this kid aint worth it, cuz man i'll always be iller
so i aint waist a good closer, so this last lines a filler
EVEN U KNOW THIS WAS LACKING

LIKE YA STYLE LINGUISTICS, U AINT NEED A DOPE CLOSER TO TAKE THIS, U GOT IT,
MASTER, JUST WORK ON YA PUNCHES AND CUT BACK ON MULTIES, JOIN THE LEAGUE