aight fam.

1st verse- flow was aight on the beat staggered in a few spots...delivery is str8 need to gain more confidence on the beat...running out of breathe...lyrics were coo...

2nd verse- multis are good...flow and delivery is better...this verse is better than the first...did u use that technique i was talking about...?

3rd- sound more confident...multis and good...flow is coo...

overall this was an ok track needs some polishing but i see mad potential fam...holla


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