GG Haterz
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Not that bad. A lot of lines weren't rhyming and didn't have a multi to end it, so watch that. I got an Eminem beat in my head, I don't know why, but I did. Overall work on your vocab and your rhyming. px
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Originally Posted by Twisted Visions
50 nickle=less than 50 cent, go back to school you idiot
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^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly.
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