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Old 03-01-05, 10:06 PM   #2
Sean Gunner
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Not that bad. A lot of lines weren't rhyming and didn't have a multi to end it, so watch that. I got an Eminem beat in my head, I don't know why, but I did. Overall work on your vocab and your rhyming. px
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