Feel like I'm copy and pasting feed, but here it is anyway:

Your flow is off on literally every single line. It shows the most when the beat hits at "bad man, bad man", and you're still yapping. Some lines you over-lap till the last "man". You'd benefit from A: varying your flow and B: cutting a syl or two from your lines. Concepts were old at best like that hammers/carpenters deal which I've been hearing since 01. It's 05. All in all man, it was a good beat that you didn't maximize on. Beat is flames.

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