I like the beat, coming in with a good flow......first verse was good, i didnt really feel the hook though..............second verse is good too, but wordplay could b a lil deeper on both verses, the last bar on the second verse didnt really work out that good. OH that wasnt a hook, wat was that then? let me peep it again.........ok i like the beat again, hahaha, .................stay cutting my wrists but keep missing the viens, that was dope, missed it the first time...................i cant hear it that well, but it's not a hook, its you talking, my bad. I guess it works, you might want to pump that up some I couldnt really hear it. It's good but has room for improvement. Keep at it

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